This poem was originally posted 1/5/09. I am sharing it again for Independence Day. Thank you to those who sacrified – so we could all write without fear.
On his lapel, stood pins of distinction.
Signaling fame, however ephemeral
cast in the communality of the iron of endurance
bred by those who walked before him.
He did not know them.
In fact, many have long since been forgotten.
As will he, when his pins are left discarded
in a tiny felt lined box
in the attics of memory
where the nuisances of unimportance
are moved with a shambling gate
from one corner to another.
Then one day, the curiosity of youth stumbled upon the box –
Blew the dust into the air, opened the lid
and aired the memories of forgotten ideals
cast aside by the arrogant certainty of purpose,
so much a part of the youth’s father.
The grandson’s eyes lit up with undoubting gleam –
the brilliance of hope – of endurance beyond adversity.
He grasped the pins and wore them to school the next day –
and into the school yard.
From thence, he set his course as if for mankind
to achieve some deed beyond his means.
As he grew, he treasured those ideals and pins.
Walked steadfast in his grandfather’s footsteps with pride.
For humanity he eventually touched this terrestrial sphere ever so
perceptibly.
When he breathed his last sigh, they placed the pins on his lapel
and put a folded flag at his fingertips.
Before they closed the lid, his son removed the pins –
and they gave him the flag.
And – as was the custom – with complacent smugness and disdain,
The pins were thereafter sold at the next garage sale.
Ray Brown
Ray,
Strong and to the point.
I have a box in my desk with 90 year old PINS
A Value not to be found in a garage sale.
thanks again
Glen Carlin
I want to thank you for reading and being appreciative. I reflected as I wrote this about how so often a son is so skeptical about his father – so certain that a father’s words or works are so old fashioned or out of place – not enligthened. At a recent reading, someone commented: “one of life’s ironies”. Ray
Pins made me cry….I have none of my father’s pins but I have his brass Navy pocket watch…and I have his poems….I know there were pins, and there were many, many ribbons from beagling field trials…I wonder where they are….and trophies….where are they?…..I wonder
where my poems and paintings will be, when I am gone……
This is lovely, touching and full of imagery. It truly is very good. It kept me anticpating, waiting for what was next. Really, very good.
Miss D
Edie
One of the sad incidents of life.
Miss Demure Restraint,
Thank you for reading and your beautiful comment.